Updated Magazine Advert

After taking into account the comments from the survey as part of my target audience research, I have updated my magazine advert:

I have made the stars and 'Rolling Stone Magazine' writing at the top a little bit smaller, and made the band's logo bigger so that it stands out more to people flicking through a magazine. I have still kept continuity with my other print products because the size of the font and the image are still the same proportions they are on the digipack, but they have just been adapted to stand out in a magazine.

I have made the QR code slightly smaller, so that your eyes are drawn to the logo first, but the code still catches your attention, which was suggested in my survey results.

I hope this makes my advert more appealing to my target audience, and will increase the chances that it will catch people's eye when flicking through a magazine.